Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Feedback & Homework due by 4/18/2016

Hi Jamie & Isaiah
Below is a feedback from Brian based on your homework post from last week.
He has not seen your in-class work yet, so I assume that we were tacking correct material.
Feel free to include your in_class sketch as your homework due for next week, and hope you guys tackle EVERY assignment by next monday.
Please let me know if you have any question.

Thank you!

Jamie : 

  1. Please replace interview photo with your original photo
  2. Remove question in interview
  3. Highlight the important content from interterviewee, use different color per interviewee. 
  4. Divide into 2 section, 1 section for Needs, 1 section for Wants. Try to simply need/wants into 4 parts.


  • (2) pages of Inspiration page
  • (5) pages of sketch

  1. Great job on research, layout and contents shows big improvement.
  2. Looks like you fully understand the your project and heading to correct direction.

  • Please organize your research page into different parts, bit hard to understand to understand the flow of your research. Suggest you show this to your friend without explaining anything and he/she will need to understand your content by just reading your research page. 
  • Please add some additional information on your research page.
  • For your inspiration page, omit using existing shoe as an inspiration content. Please replace shoe photo with other image.
  • (5)pages of sketch

*Below photos were sent from Brian, please take a look

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